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solitude
Contributed by
tawakwan
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Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I feel distressed.
I'm lost in the vastness of this urban jungle.
I seem to vanish within the noise and hectic of the metropolitan.
It seems there is no space for me as I become a shadow.
I turn voiceless,but wanting to scream.
Longing to shout out my need for companionship.
My heart bleeds as I sink under the concrete and stone of this all so cold city.
Is this to be my fate?
I have become jaded.
Grown weary of the one-sidedness.
I wish only to desire actively,without accusation or intolerance.
I long for an ally,someone who is there when I am feeble.
But this all so lonely city offers me only bleakness.
I am confronted by the unresponsive.
I am compelled into isolation,
and must abide my solitude................
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tawakwan
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2003-03-07 21:40:00]
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Re: solitude
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:44:08 AM AEST
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sorry, this is not poetry, it is just a lame attempt.
(this is a reference to your comment on one of xxmonstahsxx poems - if you have nothing constructive to say, keep your opinions to yourself) |
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