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A STATE OF MIND
Contributed by
drmpb
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Tuesday, 11th December 2007 @ 02:39:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A STATE OF MIND
by Dr. Mahendra Bhatnagar
My desires are oppressed
And restive
To find expression!
My lustful desires
Are carefully preserved by me
In a lone, hidden place,
In the hope
That they will find
Their fulfillment.
My lustful desires
Are restive
And oppressed;
Yet, they are keen to actualize
Themselves
In all experiences.
But, somehow,
The atmosphere is laden
With tear-gas,
Leaving me to weep
Unto myself; Or,
Suffer wrath of the unfulfilled desires!
E-Mail : drmahendrabh@rediffmail.com
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drmpb
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Re: A STATE OF MIND
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by ScorpionFire88 on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 01:51:26 PM AEST
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| I love the writing, but I found myself a little lost. Would you mind pm-ing me to explain? (((HUGS))) |
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Re: A STATE OF MIND
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by Secretpoet on
Wednesday, 29th April 2009 @ 08:46:50 AM AEST
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| Wow very interesting, very personal, good job with this write |
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Re: A STATE OF MIND
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by PONYCAT on
Sunday, 18th October 2009 @ 09:45:41 PM AEST
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i dont like this kind of poetry,
should i lie and pretend like I do?
it seems like its been conformed to some mold...
let go, dont hold on |
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Re: A STATE OF MIND
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by shereal_14 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 07:56:50 PM AEST
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| you've got talent, don't waste it |
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Re: A STATE OF MIND
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by SpecialK on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 09:51:38 PM AEST
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| Good description of your own mindset troubles. |
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Re: A STATE OF MIND
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by PeterDykmans on
Friday, 25th March 2011 @ 04:28:45 PM AEST
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| Can relate , Well done |
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Re: A STATE OF MIND
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by hendrix97 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 03:28:10 PM AEST
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| fantasic, really love ur writing voice |
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Re: A STATE OF MIND
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by Sheveg on
Tuesday, 10th May 2011 @ 05:15:53 PM AEST
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| Sad. |
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