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Wednesday's Cry
Contributed by
SpreadYourWings
on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I dont know where Im going
I thought you would show me
This pain I cannot face
I want to get out of this place
I keep trying so hard
But I never get too far
I try but always in the end
The scars they always send
I wish I could say its alright
But Im too tired to fight
I keep slipping away
I dont think I can stay
You dont need to worry
Ill be leaving in a hurry
But now I cant go on
Im not that strong
You dont even need to try
Im gonna go off and die
Ive done all that I could
But it will never be good
I sit and choke on my fear
Scream I dont even belong here
Why do I have all this pain
What can I do to change?
I feel like Im dying
Im so sick of crying
Wont you reach out your hand?
Wont you please help me stand?
These lies I have to admit
I cant go through it
Ive been so sad for a while
I cant even smile
I watch as you pass me by
I dont want to cry
I wish that I could see you
But theres no place for me to run to
I wish that I had the strength to say
Ill see you on next Wednesday
My body aches and its all sore
How I wish Id never been born
Im so sorry but goodbye
I can no longer survive
I just hurt so much
My soul cant take this crush
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2003-03-07 23:40:00]
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Re: Wednesday's Cry
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 12:27:19 AM AEST
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Wow... I really like this part...
I feel like I’m dying
I’m so sick of crying
Won’t you reach out your hand?
Won’t you please help me stand?
Sad, but great job.
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Wednesday's Cry
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by Metalmouth666 on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 01:30:52 AM AEST
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Wow as well... I like the poem, it has great thought into it.
"You don’t even need to try
I’m gonna go off and die
I’ve done all that I could
But it will never be good"
it seams the same with me sometimes, mostly the last two lines, I may have done the best that I could have, but to others it's not ever good enough... |
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Re: Wednesday's Cry
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by Love_impossible on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 08:41:45 PM AEST
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None of us chose to be born, but the real challenge is trying to survive, but my idea of surviving can't be done within this society.
It seems hopeless sometimes....and maybe it is, but maybe not |
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