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Two Who Were One
Contributed by
HarrisonRoosevelt
on
Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 11:41:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A gentle breeze across the seas
And a bright moon in the sky
Yet on the ground a boy had drowned
Lost in his tears and cries
My friend, my friend is this the end
Please tell me where you've gone
Our hearts still ache with past mistakes
But we must carry on
A passion too strong is what went wrong
A forbidden line was crossed
And lingering pain that still remains
Forces friendship to be lost
Much regret but let's not forget
The memories we shared
The stars above couldn't bound our love
Remember how much we cared
A gentle breeze across the seas
And a new sun in the sky
Two who were one are now undone
But please don't say goodbye.
Copyright ©
HarrisonRoosevelt
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2007-12-13 11:41:34]
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Re: Two Who Were One
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by conorshawn on
Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 04:15:59 PM AEST
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brillant, i have had this happen in my past you put my love to words.
i dont know about you but my love i look for is my best friend. i had it and i lost it women just dont think like me. she is gone and mt search continues.
thank you for putting it to words for me. |
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Re: Two Who Were One
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by mrpeanut64 on
Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 04:54:22 PM AEST
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| I know these feelings all too well. You've expressed them beautifully here. Well done. |
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