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A fool in love
Contributed by
mrpeanut64
on
Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 04:49:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Separated by this mighty gulf,
Yet only a few steps away
I find I always walk by your desk
And you smile at me everyday
Yet do you really understand
Just what that smile can do
It makes my legs feel very weak
And my heart starts beat anew
Even on those rare days
When youre feeling down
I do my best to lift the mood
And even act the clown
Should trouble ever come your way
Please do not despair
Just look my way youll see my hand
To lift your every care
Although I know I am a fool
For your heart is already taken
I pledge to you my heart and soul
From my dreams do not awaken
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mrpeanut64
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2007-12-13 16:49:25]
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Re: A fool in love
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 06:25:46 AM AEST
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| Planters mr peanut with a petrified cain without a sickle attached for he is not the reaper but probly Ignorant The saying work for peanuts.Poem brought back memories and is like a very liery dog or cat just a dog thats been through hell,Beaten by physical&verbal abuse as well,Emotions cautiuos as he can be,One wrong move and its history,-Time Its On Myside You Come Running Back You Come Runnin Back To Me Meee-as in the lyric as always true-Follow Me-good poem brought back inner feelings.Comment From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. |
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Re: A fool in love
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by conorshawn on
Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 01:39:38 PM AEST
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| very powerfull |
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