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He loves me...not
Contributed by
ki
on
Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 12:29:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Destroy all of my self-esteem
Then take away my pride
Rape me of my youthfullness
And leave me there to die
Hate me because u love me
Just make me your slave
Tell me that i'm selfish
And then take back all u gave
Slap me once,beat me twice
Kill me with your words
Make a living off my pain
Til it no longer hurts
Smile at your accomplishments
Crown yourself the king
Gain all the things u don't deserve
While i loose everything
Copyright ©
ki
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2007-12-14 00:29:15]
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Re: He loves me...not
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 06:12:05 AM AEST
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| Smells Like Teen Spirit,or well I stuck up for most of you I gave trust hard for me to do,-Nothing Left In This World Start Again Nice Day For A White Wedding Nice Day To Start Again-Rape Me Rape Me My Friend Rape Me Rape Me Again-S.O.S.Kill Me-Hate Me What Else Should I Be All Appologies-Ball And Chain-Married Barried-Hey Hey You You Get Off My Cloud Dont Come Around Because Twos A Frown-I Touch Myself And I Know It-Dont Tred On Me-Cherry Flavored Antacids-I Hurt Myself Today-I Think Im Dumb Maybe Just Happy-Kings And Queens And Guiteens-Dirty Laundry-Im A Looser Baby So Why Dont You Kill Me-great poem I placed sentences with partial lyrics in sentences in sentences to show expression feel or mood Comment From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. |
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Re: He loves me...not
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by conorshawn on
Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 01:42:02 PM AEST
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| im speechless very powerful and moving. we all experience the thoughts that become part of our writings. |
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Re: He loves me...not
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by bluestars on
Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 06:47:33 PM AEST
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Fantastic poem
Enjoyed every single line
so very well put
Keep on writing n keep on sharing ur talent with us all
Best wishes
*Bluestars* |
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