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Aftermath
Contributed by
SerenBach
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Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 06:32:30 AM in AEST
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Lonely but not alone.
Surrounded by people yet Ive
never felt so isolated
Drowning so slowly
It's barely noticeable
Feeling numb and hollow
Like my heart has been ripped out
But its still beating to keep me alive
I'm scared but I'm reaching put for help
Slowly but surely I'm putting
The pieces he broke back together
I'm still fragile but
I'm getting stronger by the day
I will prove to all of them
That i can do this.
Copyright ©
SerenBach
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2007-12-14 06:32:30]
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Re: Aftermath
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by tiggytom on
Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 10:21:47 AM AEST
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Nice portrayal of emotion.
Good stuff
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