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Welcome to hell
Contributed by
black-reaper
on
Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 01:05:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Welcome to hell
Welcome to hell
would you like to come in?
Step over the threshold
and let the journey begin
The first thing you do
is take a step back
Because hell makes no sense
and guidance is slack
So you wander around
in a place filled with screams
From the terror that finds it's way
into your dreams
There is no escape
from this place,you know
You can fight all you want
but hell won't let go
You'll look for a light
but find that there's none
And you can never undo
the damage you've done
So you sell your soul
in exchange for a deal
But in hell, deals break
and there is no appeal
The peace you were promised
never enters your mind
And the end to your nightmares
you're never to find
If this sounds like a place
that you'd like to be
Take hold of my hand
and come there with me
But first, I must warn you
of that which you'll lose
So listen carefully
before you choose
Your soul is the first thing to go
then your heart
And your sanity then
from you will depart
Then you're lost and you're lonely
not knowing your needs
And it's from this confusion
that pure evil feeds
So you sink even lower
inside of this place
And you put on a mask
to cover your face
So that nobody knows
the pain that you hide
And nobody knows
the place you reside
And this I can tell you
with certainty
Your soul will be lost
for eternity
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black-reaper
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2007-12-15 13:05:56]
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Re: Welcome to hell
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 01:41:54 PM AEST
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No thanks.
good writing tho.
huggs,
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Re: Welcome to hell
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by bluestars on
Sunday, 16th December 2007 @ 08:38:43 AM AEST
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Awesome piece
You have great talent
Keep on writing
n thanks for sharing ur work
with us all
Best wishes
Bluestars |
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Re: Welcome to hell
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by blackrose233 on
Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 06:51:10 AM AEST
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| so true I love it and it flows good |
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