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I pulled it by mistake
Contributed by
Jen_unknown_to_myself
on
Sunday, 16th December 2007 @ 12:36:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Why is it that such a beautiful flower symbolizes
Something so ugly?
Or is it beautiful?
Im not too sure
Some like Creg see the flower and what it stands for
as the purest beauty of all
Marigolds are his favorite flower.
He sits that gun beside the vase of marigolds I gave him
He also sat a note that said
Im sorry Jen I love you too much.
He then laid down on the bed with a marigold between his hands
He bled for hours until he died
He commited suicide
He shot himself in the gut
As if to say I didnt kill me you did
I think I caused it
I know I pulled the trigger by mistake
Now he's caused my crimson puddles to come back
with a steady drip drip drip
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Jen_unknown_to_myself
... [
2007-12-16 12:36:55]
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Re: I pulled it by mistake
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by dummie on
Sunday, 16th December 2007 @ 06:39:56 PM AEST
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| wunderful and bewildering. i am filled with bewilderment. |
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Re: I pulled it by mistake
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by juliestevens18 on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 12:05:08 PM AEST
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| this is an amazing poem. you are truly gifted. i write similarly to you. keep writing, this is great! |
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