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Space
Contributed by
ki
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Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 02:56:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When u call and there is no answer
Dont panic..Im just giving u ur space
And the time that u requested
Without seeing my face
When u clear ur mind of everything
And think of me no more
U'll be filled with such a sadness
Un-like u've never known before
I simply cannot find the words
To say all i need to say
Im so used to u leaving me behind
It won't matter anyway
So before u walk away just know
I did nothing more than try
And if u decide to come back one day
I'll make sure to ask u why !
Copyright ©
ki
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2007-12-19 02:56:54]
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Re: Space
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by enigma on
Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 03:06:48 AM AEST
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Ki,
...delightful! Like you said, it was funny, cute, and all that, but it really worked, too. My first response to the guy was, what a jerk. But after shaking my head condescendingly a few times, I actually felt sorry for him. You're the fortunate one.
Very enjoyable!
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