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drowning
Contributed by
blackrose233
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Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 06:35:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Slowly suffocating I cant breathe
why cant I just leave
Why must I stay when there is nothing more to say
fire burning in my head, hearing whispers you must be dead
Ware is my escape
everythings so desecrate
I dont have a happy place to find, so why should I keep wasting my time
no one can fix me now I am beyond repair
they dont see me they cant feel me like Im not even their
just a shadow lingering behind
just a shadow still here past its time
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2007-12-21 06:35:55]
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Re: drowning
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 04:01:11 PM AEST
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Sad but well written. We all have our bad weeks.
hang tuff.
huggs, happy, happy holidays,
emy |
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Re: drowning
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by shawna14 on
Friday, 22nd February 2008 @ 03:44:23 PM AEST
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| I like it a lot it sad but good |
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