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Sweet Revival
Contributed by
law_glen18
on
Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 07:47:13 PM in AEST
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Through all the pain
And all the trouble
Take out that
Which makes you cry
The world is round
Here in our bubble
Live your life
Like you'll never die
Things can be hard
They'll be really tough
But you'll always get through
If you let you heart Love
Put your sadness under
A powerful lock and key
And wear your raw emotion
For all the world to see
You are the meaning
A purpose in life
Follow your soul
Through good and through strife
By the powers of life
And the pureness of sand
You'll get right on through
Just reach out your hand
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law_glen18
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Re: Sweet Revival
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 01:13:23 AM AEST
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| good poem-Heavy Meatal-(locks)From The Grim Reaper,DevilspRIEST KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. |
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Re: Sweet Revival
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by CrystalWinters on
Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 02:21:07 AM AEST
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| I like "Put your sadness under a powerful lock and key", good write :) |
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Re: Sweet Revival
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 11:54:19 AM AEST
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Great write!!!
Merry Christmas & A Happy New Year!!!
honey56 |
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Re: Sweet Revival
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by brew on
Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 02:08:41 PM AEST
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Always like your writes
they are subtle but from the heart
Take care
Merry Christmas
Happy New yr
Hugs
brew~ aka dayna |
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