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A Vagabond Of Life
Contributed by
His_Infernal_Majesty
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Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 07:01:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Wont you help me? I appear to be lost.
Where are you heading? To a place that Ive lost.
What is this place you seek to find?
The habitation of he who is Divine.
A temple that is not mine to raze,
The Elders presents, I must evade.
So tedious is the pattern of hurt,
When the hindrance of happiness is so overt.
Someday, the consecrated temple of light,
Will forever turn to the darkness of night.
In his benevolent taking of my life.
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His_Infernal_Majesty
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2007-12-22 07:01:22]
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Re: A Vagabond Of Life
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 08:38:42 AM AEST
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| Not so sure about the 4-4-3 thing. The last stanza was great though. |
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Re: A Vagabond Of Life
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 11:44:49 AM AEST
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Nice write..
Wishing You & Your A Merry Christmas & A Happy New Year!!
honey56 |
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