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HELLo~ Love TRAVELER
Contributed by
dummie
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Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 05:42:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Our carnal passion looms like a spindle of thread.
We become one.
Our lust burns and scathes and scorches away
The memories of yesterday.
A hatchet and club buried in the wall
As telling as the Crystal Ball
Intersecting highway towns
An exit in the dark.
The fog winding down
Through a seaside town.
Where me and my love settle
With ideas and a kettle
of tea. for me.
Copyright ©
dummie
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2007-12-23 17:42:02]
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Re: HELLo~ Love TRAVELER
(User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on
Monday, 24th December 2007 @ 07:40:55 AM AEST
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| Beautiful swork,I really enjoyed it!! |
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Re: HELLo~ Love TRAVELER
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by lost_again on
Monday, 24th December 2007 @ 08:19:01 AM AEST
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Enticing work, lured the reader to other places with the touch of sensual air.
LA |
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Re: HELLo~ Love TRAVELER
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by spooky on
Monday, 24th December 2007 @ 04:13:17 PM AEST
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different,,good,,unusal,,but great to the imagination of the mind,,
a friend in words,,
spooky |
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