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Ignorance
Contributed by
ki
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Friday, 28th December 2007 @ 01:27:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Look at me
And ignore the fact
That yes,i have a brain
Stare until ur eyes pop out
And assume im only vain
Whistle when im walking by
Hang out your window
At red lights
Hide ur perversion in the days
And appear to me at nite
I wonder if u'll ever know
What it's like to be me
And have ur pride taken away
Displayed for the world to see
Why must i be perfect
And not allowed to have bad days
Why do people always think
My only prayer lies in my face
Dependance on a pretty smile
Will only go so far
The girl everyone swears to know
Is nothing like they are
So call me names and laugh at me
U'll never break my heart
I've never had such arrogance
And i don't intend to start
Copyright ©
ki
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2007-12-28 01:27:31]
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Re: Ignorance
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by conorshawn on
Friday, 28th December 2007 @ 02:55:09 AM AEST
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| very good write. why is it people act this way when they see a pretty face and assume they know us or about us. |
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Re: Ignorance
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 8th January 2008 @ 08:48:04 AM AEST
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hm, it's a slap in the face. no sugar coating, fancying it up. admirable.
the rhyming went very smoothly, and the topic didnt seem to bounce around, so the structure was very balanced, the topic interesting also.
nice job.
PS: thanks for the comment on "Breathe, darling" |
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