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Whisper Into Me...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When first your whispers soothed my soul As your breath had warmed my face Desire ignited deep within as Your mouth I longed to taste To trace the smoothness of your lips My tongue in search of yours Liquified love found in juices From where your whispers softly fall Pressing up against your warmth Eyes closed,I feel my way Touching on our desires rush As we tempt it with foreplay Breasts adorned with lace of white Rise and fall with lustful sighs I am here and yet I'm there Lost somewhere in your eyes Let caressing hands so know me As your heart so knows my soul Breathe us in,enhance your senses Let the passion take control Into desires place of warmth Fall deeper than the sea Surround yourself within my love And whisper softly into me
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LovingWhispers
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2003-03-08 17:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Whisper Into Me...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 05:51:55 PM AEST (User
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nice visuals good write very passionate
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Re: Whisper Into Me...
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 07:29:55 PM AEST (User
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Oh my goodness, what's with the poems today?? Everyone's trying to get me all stirred up, I swear!!! Arg. Oh well, you know you've written a good poem when.........
lol :)
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Re: Whisper Into Me...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lone_er on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 10:43:55 PM AEST (User
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Excellent passion in this poem. Appeals to the romantic in me-excellently done
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Re: Whisper Into Me...
(User Rating: 1 ) by wolfflow on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 02:51:25 PM AEST (User
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| *sighs*, this flows so easily through the mind and soul, i would love to be able to write something so good as this |
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