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Suspended
Contributed by
wretched_reflections
on
Saturday, 29th December 2007 @ 08:11:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Drifted high
Twitch along with time
Drifted by
Gazed at bloodless mimes
Writhe in insecurity
Spineless you weep
Laced with wire
Dug into malleable skin
Scars that prove
You were used
Gorgeous frustration
Latched on the only exit
Strapped onto metallic cylinders
Friction bursts and the pain pours
Vibrate and burn
Your soot emits a sickly fragrance
Malignantly draining the senses
Drifted high
Twitch along with time
Drifted by
Gazed at bloodless mimes
Writhe in insecurity
Spineless you weep
Swaying with the tempest
Tempted by the ludicrous
I jumped off a cliff and landed on maryjane
Drifted high
Drifted by
Twitch along with time
I tripped over the edge and landed on maryjane.
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Re: Suspended
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by lost_again on
Saturday, 29th December 2007 @ 08:14:15 AM AEST
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The entire poem is well constructed.
I loved the ending of it I tripped over the edge and landed on maryjane, interesting. |
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