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Cover Me
Contributed by
honey56
on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 05:21:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Let your arms cover me
And protect me
From the high part of the
Day
Your branches leafless in
In the winter's sun
But, can I rest beneath
Your branches of skeleton
Frame.
Through the gusty wind
That blow so strong
Winter cold wind
Even thou the sunshine is
High
The color is gray
The moon is rising
With a icy smile
The hostile wind is
Blowing with vengeance
Looking for retribution
Will you
Cover me with your skeleton
Fingers
Hide me from that angry wind
Clashing with that frosty moon
Cold, freezing cold
Ill make me a home within
The layer of your wood to keep
Me warm
Until spring blossom's out and
All
Love bloom's in may
To
Blossom in June and end in
July
Even the trees sprouts out
Again to become anew
With bloom's ablaze in the spring
A coming
Blossom with a beauty of a deep
Rich green hue
Cover me within your walls so my off
Springs may grow
Warm and cuddley my off spring's
Grow for our new generation
Cover me from the icy angry wind
Blowing on me
On and around me
I dont wanna freeze and snap, pop
And crack
I wanna to be cover and warm where
My wings will grow..
Copyright ©
honey56
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2008-01-09 05:21:16]
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Re: Cover Me
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 08:06:49 AM AEST
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| As in warmth my fingers tell all,Accept to owe or recieve I be there in every fall.Watch the outward or the point of wich way,My love to you in many forms you can pay.Devotion love and warmth just for one night,Rumores of me no reason to fright.The color is correct reflections only of my ship,As the moon reflects the lighthouses may you R.I.P. My boat or ship is like a blanket if two lay together,Protection and total bliss from all types of weather.Spring seems dead to thoes around me ,My love to you is nothing more than the body of sea.My frame you can hold please try not start,The anger rages as total never to part.The sides of my ship have color of green,Years of knowledge and what I have seen.You will allways have comfort but not as though you want,You will allways be warm and passionate sourounded by my cloke, my threads,and it will hunt.My wings as though I open my cloke(sp?),To pay or recieve this is no joke.Great Poem:Cover Me:Comment From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. The poem:Cover Me:by honey56 inspired me to write this poem write off the riff time roughly10mins.01-08-2007This may be considerd as one of my Hourglassess as Hourglass##A a B side. time ended(01-08-2007)-(4:08PM). |
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Re: Cover Me
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by zenith66 on
Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 10:47:43 AM AEST
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Fantastic piece of writing here i could feel the frozen wind engulfing me the icy moons smile upon my brittle soul, ;you really captured a feeling of vulnerablity here and then spring comes and all things nice, and i could feel it bloom, great wrting here!!!
keep it up!!
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Re: Cover Me
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by MemeCaroline on
Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 03:12:02 AM AEST
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| I don't like cold windy days as they cause me pain. Reading this poem, I could feel the cold reach through the words, making me shiver and ache. Very good write. I guess I need to go take a warm bath to get rid of the chill. God Bless! I would love to chat with you some time. |
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Re: Cover Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 08:41:49 AM AEST
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Speaking of fallen in love, " I wanna to be cover and warm where My wings will grow "
this line is a heart stopper, your do write
with conviction my friend second to nothing in your artistry i might add, A lovely offering to these pages . . . take care.
Ben
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Re: Cover Me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 01:12:43 AM AEST
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Incredible writting no matter how one translates it.
good work, my friend.
Huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Cover Me
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by kaycas on
Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 03:29:54 AM AEST
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You put the reader right in the place where they can feel the wind trying to engulf you, yet the sun is managing to shine through, as it did through your words. What a joy to read.
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