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In the future ware do you see yourself,
Contributed by
blackrose233
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Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 06:58:09 AM in AEST
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In the future ware do you see yourself, six feet under or a vase of ashes used as a bookshelf
Left to sit, to rot my dust will have its own dust
Lost a life I never wanted
Never being remembered but always forgotten
No one really knew me, I never knew myself
Setting hungry dogs for a scrap of meat thats how you enter and how you leave always fighting to be ok
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Re: In the future ware do you see yourself,
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 07:39:45 AM AEST
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| Ash To Ash Dust To Dust The Memory Stays The Same.Good Poem:In the future ware do you see yourself:Comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L Jr |
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Re: In the future ware do you see yourself,
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by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 08:58:17 AM AEST
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Only the Lord knows...
We can only hope our lives be as wished but in most cases life takes another twist..
God Bless!! |
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Re: In the future ware do you see yourself,
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by JohnYamrus on
Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 12:39:45 AM AEST
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you've got a typo...you should have "where", not "ware"...a WARE is something for sale...a commodity. also, a vase can sit ON a booksehlf, but can't be used AS a bookshelf. think about the MEANING of your words. they're not just sounds.
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