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when you push me away
Contributed by
forgotten_poet
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Monday, 14th January 2008 @ 04:33:01 PM in AEST
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words uttered with quick disdain
every breath kills me just the same
as the painful silince which seperates
leaving no more words to say
my darling one i beg of you
do not declare my love untrue
when i grows stronger with each passing day
to pull you back when you push me away
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Re: when you push me away
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th January 2008 @ 11:27:02 PM AEST
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| Sweet poem - full of emotion and so sad. Nice work. |
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Re: when you push me away
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by ki on
Tuesday, 15th January 2008 @ 01:11:08 AM AEST
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| emotional..i would have liked to hear more however |
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