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Summer's Fall
Contributed by
dreamer_for_eternity
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Tuesday, 15th January 2008 @ 03:59:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I stood there in the rain for quite some time
Waiting for you to come my way
To give me the reason of why you left
I could have given you a reason to stay
I stood there in the rain for quite some time
Too ignorant to see that you were gone
No one knew what I was going through then
Because I told them that nothing was wrong
I stood there in the rain for quite some time
My summer completely wrapped up in you
They called me inside, yet still I waited
I figured youd show up once you knew
I stood there in the rain for quite some time
Until the summers fall returned
Those three months completely consumed
Want to know what I learned?
I stood there in the rain for quite some time
Yet learned nothing at all
So if you could please let me know
Why didnt you at least make a call?
I stood there in the rain for quite some time
Doing what any sane person wouldnt dare
Bound and determined to give up everything
In hopes that someday youd care
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Re: Summer's Fall
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by MemeCaroline on
Tuesday, 15th January 2008 @ 06:25:01 PM AEST
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| Very well-expressed. Did your tears match the rain drop for drop? Touching poem. |
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