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Time
Contributed by
SAMANTHAAAA
on
Wednesday, 16th January 2008 @ 10:06:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Time moves according to your mood
And never can you sway its beat
Like a monotone life, subdued
For with each passing minute skewed
The rhythm of the stepping feet
Time moves according to your mood
And truth be told the days so crude
Nothing ever could seem so sweet
Like a monotone life, subdued
Slowest time and you must elude
To regain the conscious you meet
Time moves according to your mood
So why must the people seclude
The fact of time acting secrete
Like a monotone life, subdued
For it tells all this time we screwed
And it doesnt mean we are neat
Time moves according to your mood
Like a monotone life, subdued
Copyright ©
SAMANTHAAAA
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2008-01-16 10:06:13]
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Re: Time
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by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 16th January 2008 @ 11:09:26 PM AEST
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a lovely write here, and i must say i loved the the last line " like a monotone subdued" fabulous line and a unique outlook on time and its constant chaning, well done good writing, keep it up!!
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