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Addiction
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 05:01:10 AM in AEST
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You are,
you are a dangerous addiction
You are,
you are a needle in my vein
You are,
you are a virulent affliction
And I,
can't tell the pleasure from the pain
She blends herself into my blood and I can feel the burn
My body tingles from the rush, you'd think that I would learn
I know I cannot pay the price that comes with this desire
So I will sell my soul and dive headfirst into the fire...
You are,
you are a line upon a mirror
You are,
you are a habit sent from Hell
You are,
You are the Devil drawing nearer
And I,
will die a captive to your spell
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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2008-01-17 05:01:10]
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Re: Addiction
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by ribbons_and_lace09 on
Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 06:04:19 AM AEST
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| that is beyond amazing!!! many kudos to you! this is brilliantly written! keep up the good work! |
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Re: Addiction
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 07:33:50 AM AEST
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Wow this is really good=]
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Re: Addiction
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by enigma on
Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 11:22:25 AM AEST
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Rakerman1999,
Good luck!
ron...enigma |
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Re: Addiction
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by Spike on
Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 10:51:52 PM AEST
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Larry,
Always a pleasure to read the master. A compelling metre, subtle rhyme scheme and a dangerous topic indeed. Self destruction, yes, but oh so tempting...
S.
miscellaneous? (a category that shouldn't exist). |
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Re: Addiction
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 11:13:28 AM AEST
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whew this could almost sting a little my friend.
I loved the way you used the spell of a woman like a drug to compare it to. That is sharp, your pen is still smoking........ Wishing we had a chance to talk I miss our long talks my friend and I miss you.
Roses at your feet,
petals in the air.....
Michelle |
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Re: Addiction
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by sniffels on
Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 03:45:02 AM AEST
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| I really like this one Dad! Keep them coming! I want to read more. Love you! |
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