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Show of Colours
Contributed by
spike
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Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 10:41:30 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Rose-Marie Rychner
Bottle me up and cast me out
to seas of love and isles of doubt,
where drifting slow on turning tide
Ill wash up on your better side
Arms and hands and heart and lips
and legs and yoni, breasts and hips
head and tongue and eyes and
soul and I want to embrace your all
Unstop my heart and read my chest,
where blood tinged letters lie at rest
a declaration to the world
that sails of passion have unfurled
Dreams and fears and laughter falling
hope and looks and tears recalling
fire and ice to Spring and
Fall and I am going to have your all.
Copyright ©
spike
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2008-01-17 22:41:30]
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Re: Show of Colours
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 03:18:36 AM AEST
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| A beautiful, beautiful write..I truly like theeasy flow in it..Remarkable it is!!! |
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Re: Show of Colours
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 04:10:53 AM AEST
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A passionate show of colours.A declaration to the Earth Mother that there will be no holding back.Have her all,Spike.This made me want to shout.YES YES YES,
Den |
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Re: Show of Colours
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by brew on
Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 01:50:53 PM AEST
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Wow .Your writes, never cease to amaze me
Most incrediable writer, with so much feeling and heart
I do love your writes, Spike
Brew~! aka .Dayna |
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Re: Show of Colours
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th January 2008 @ 12:32:28 AM AEST
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wow spike! A love letter, filled with a passion not to be denied! I suppose it could be as
Den suggests, (to Mother Earth), but being the hopeless romantic, you KNOW I am, I
prefer to think it was inspired by a woman. Please don't dash my illusions by telling me
I'm wrong. *sigh* I'd just like to think that somewhere in the world someone is lost
within the infatuation of desire; tangled in the web of attraction; drowning in the
seas of passion!! (Not enough of that in the world, I'm afraid)
Love the word choices, dear poet. And the flow is beautifullly melodic. A kind
of flawless, I strive to write. :)
I always find a sort of peace on your page that I desperately love. If I
could, I would live here. Take care, poet.
~Breezy |
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Re: Show of Colours
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by Dom on
Friday, 25th January 2008 @ 05:54:56 AM AEST
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Perilously passionate Spike!
Your words soar and sing beautifully of an all-encompassing orchestra of emotions.
And what an inspiration, your words complement the image wonderfully, each adding to the other in my opinion.
Take care,
Dom |
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