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A Syringe for a Pacifier
Contributed by
reprobate
on
Saturday, 19th January 2008 @ 03:18:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Sitting in the dark with your memories
Much too sick with anger to cry any more
Life has been one long fatal disease
One that ingesting chemicals might cure
Trying all the time just to simply forget
The bile in your throat won't go away
Discarded by fate like an unwanted pet
Now you're a prostitute that has to pay
Sold all your dreams to obey the rules
Were in the way and somehow amiss
Deemed useless by sanctimonious fools
Sinking further into your personal abyss
She's calling out to you ever so sweetly
Taunting, tempting with winsome wiles
Promising a stupored respite completely
Troubles discarded in tiny white piles
Without concern for how much is spent
Delicately danced over fulvous flame
Empty promises where the groceries went
Dose disguised demons disannul shame
Crimson bloom captured in a hypodermic cage
Nebulous numb crawls contemptuously inside
Silent sopor solicits socage in your rage
Pain putrified past any form of personal pride
You wear your scars like some reward
Forgetting they're not momentos won
Surfeit souvenirs smothering forward
Indicators of war's lost and you're done
Copyright ©
reprobate
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2008-01-19 03:18:30]
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Re: A Syringe for a Pacifier
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 19th January 2008 @ 04:08:23 AM AEST
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Things will be better, you have your life ahead of you..But, you did however wrote this beautiful poem from your life woes!!
God Bless you |
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Re: A Syringe for a Pacifier
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 19th January 2008 @ 04:08:25 AM AEST
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Things will be better, you have your life ahead of you..But, you did however wrote this beautiful poem from your life woes!!
God Bless you |
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Re: A Syringe for a Pacifier
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 19th January 2008 @ 02:36:13 PM AEST
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i dont even pretend to know where this poem comes from....
this may be a really odd way to phrase it but i really enjoy reading your stuff. even though it is pretty dark i enjoy how you use your words. which if i am honest i cannot say that about many peoples works on here.
i normally find it hard to stick with poems that are longer than say 4 stanzas because i get bored with them....but yours capture my mind. i am soooooo glad i stumbled upon your work through one of my random moments of reading all the latest posted poetry,...
Life has been one long fatal disease
Empty promises where the groceries went
Crimson bloom captured in a hypodermic cage
these three lines made the whole poem for me........ |
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Re: A Syringe for a Pacifier
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by dan0198 on
Saturday, 19th January 2008 @ 08:12:32 PM AEST
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| This piece speaks so well. The line, Sold all your dreams to obey the rules, struck a tone with me. Thank you. |
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Re: A Syringe for a Pacifier
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 06:42:38 PM AEST
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Excellent Write .
Thanks fer sharing
Whisper
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Re: A Syringe for a Pacifier
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by Keisha on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 12:45:26 PM AEST
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This is a good read,
verry deep.
Good job. |
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Re: A Syringe for a Pacifier
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by InfinitePoet on
Thursday, 4th August 2011 @ 12:33:29 PM AEST
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Srt 8 up Righteous read!! Keeping itreal is the sure fire way to great and memorable poetry!! No shame in who I am when i write at all!! I idetify with every word on this piece!! Keep writing neve quit!! Keep posting and sharing so others like me will realize i'm not alone in my hell full of needle pricks!!
Peace,
Dana |
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Re: A Syringe for a Pacifier
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th May 2014 @ 04:44:50 PM AEST
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that old loneliness of drug addiction, out of tears,
sitting in the dark... always seems better 'til the
morning 'afters' ~this poem is heartfelt out there,
its honest, raw and teaches a lesson, i believe, it
is b e a u t i f u l l y written, you got me tho buddy,
had to break out the dictionary lol; just goes to show
we can improve our way of life- and to still be able to
put words together ~let alone so eloquently as you
have done so here~ we are truly blessed...
hugs n' love nessa |
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