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a night to remember
Contributed by
ribbons_and_lace09
on
Sunday, 20th January 2008 @ 11:19:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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two lovers hand in hand
walk in the sand
enjoying the setting of the sun
and just like the night their fun has just begun,
Tonight is a night to remember
stars dance across the tropical midnight sky setting the scene
on a beautiful romantic night in september
they danced on the beach as they had in her dream,
he told her to hold out her hands and close her eyes
he puts in her hands the surprise
a dozen roses with a card
she opened the card and read it aloud
"i never forget the little things that you say,
i didn't forget what day it is today,
i know you love to watch sunsets on the beach, stars, and roses,
i did all of this to say i love you and to have the happiest birthday that
you'll never forget."
speechless and teary-eyed
he holds her close and she starts to cry
and she said
"i'll never forget this night until the day i die."
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Re: a night to remember
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by shelby on
Sunday, 20th January 2008 @ 11:38:35 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, I felt the tenderness and fun within these lines. You brought it right off the page and took me along. Lovely work.
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Re: a night to remember
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by zenith66 on
Thursday, 24th January 2008 @ 06:33:10 AM AEST
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yes lovely write here it really caught me and hurled me along with the rythm well done!!
its very unique in its style and thats a very good thing!! anyway thanks for your lovely comments on my poem its appreciated very much thanks!!! ttyl |
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