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Withhold The Day
Contributed by
ramfire
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Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Give me your sweet lips so soft I beg you.
Again let me hold you this night in my
arms telling you that life for me is new
since thy soft whisper gave first little sigh.
Your fingers play a tune on me that drives
a wondrous feeling deep within I cant hide.
Couldst we but hold this time throughout our lives
a never ending pleasure by your side
Tomorrows day advances like a thief
to steal away your close embrace from me.
But I do know our separations brief
Again with you as my new life should be.
Lips sweet and gentle fingers they do play
a loving tune that cries withhold the day.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2008-01-22 02:25:00]
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Re: Withhold The Day
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 06:08:32 AM AEST
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| this is awsome! i love the way you bring this write together..life can be so demanding but love withstands it all, and keeps us strong to withstand the rest. |
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Re: Withhold The Day
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 08:01:32 AM AEST
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tomorrows day advances like a thief. what a line.
Great work my friend
Michelle |
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Re: Withhold The Day
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by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 10:53:58 AM AEST
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This is such a beautiful romantic write...
Blessings |
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Re: Withhold The Day
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 08:23:18 AM AEST
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A beautifully touching piece. Just what the doctor ordered.
Peace
~Shannon |
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