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Wanderer
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 05:10:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It feels like a winter day.
Coffee to stave off harsh cold.
A cold that penetrates the very being
of a soul lost and so alone.
Stone dark alleys,
strewn with litter.
lost reminders of someones day
cast aside carelessly.
He has seen many streets.
Sitting on a park bench in the rain.
Conclusions never come,
a toast to all the wandering souls such as he.
Half empty whiskey bottle.
Resting half tilted in his jacket.
Wells of soul running dry.
Tattered in a windstorm like a kite.
Jewels of better moments,
or were there any afterall?
maybe the stones never polished
the surfaces to a smooth shine.
The minute dust in strong breeze.
a leaf falling from half naked branch.
Chance is all there is.
Does he want to leave it all to chance once more?
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-01-22 05:10:58]
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Re: Wanderer
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by irodethetrain2u on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 05:35:28 AM AEST
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Beautiful.
Emotional.
Captures the essence of it's title. |
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Re: Wanderer
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 05:56:10 AM AEST
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Shel your is more than just the poetry of one
who write's merely to express her self, but that of a true artist who continue's to weave
an abundance of true beauty for the heart to
admire and love . . .
((((Michelle))))
Ben |
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Re: Wanderer
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 06:49:54 AM AEST
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Michelle i miss reading your poetry ,
and you never disapoint me in any of your writes your just a class of your own :)
dang it we keep missing each other on here or myspace lol.
big hugs |
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Re: Wanderer
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 05:10:09 PM AEST
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beautifully written with heart,,
a friend in words
craig s. meeks |
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Re: Wanderer
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 26th January 2008 @ 08:23:17 PM AEST
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| A Masterful flow.... |
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Re: Wanderer
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 26th January 2008 @ 08:23:36 PM AEST
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| A Masterful flow.... |
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Re: Wanderer
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by Crow on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 03:54:34 PM AEST
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| I`ve seen this...the hands that would rock babies is feared to touch, and the sweet smell of that whiskey is not the soul, but a glazing" love the read hon" Vincent |
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Re: Wanderer
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by UnknownLegend on
Tuesday, 12th February 2008 @ 03:51:15 PM AEST
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| while perusing your poems tonight I came across this little gem ....and I say that in the sincerest form ..... I love the simile and metaphoric descriptions used to set the stage for this piece.... what I have to refer to as a gem ..... It brought back stark memories of my younger and wilder days, Write on my friend, david |
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Re: Wanderer
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by colinb on
Wednesday, 20th March 2013 @ 05:29:51 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written Michell as always outstanding poetry |
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