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GREASEPAINT, WISHES AND TEARDROPS
Contributed by
reprobate
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Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 05:25:04 AM in AEST
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Not a moment passed in this carnival of tears I haven't wished
That you never had the misfortune of meeting me that night
I wouldn't know and feel how empty my world really is now
And my lonely days might not so cold without you in them
With each tick, my heart screams and breaks for your embrace
Yet my head aches over what I know is the right thing to do
Because my Quixotic ideals are entirely much too stubborn
Undoubtedly you could do a whole lot better than me
For you need a special soul, one that will compliment your own
That someone who will make you smile and hope once again
A person who'll walk with you hand-in hand into tomorrow
And surely not all over you like I most certainly would
I do love you so very much and my resolve is not really great
So don't tell me you anything positive such as you love me
You truly can't mean it from your heart and I'm too weak
And you deserve more than this broken dreamer
I can't even save myself from myself, let alone rescue you
No, I can't and won't do this you -- my sweetest desire
I'm definitely not some gallant knight in shining armor
Just a loser who can't even afford aluminum foil
Remembering your smile and so very afraid for your dreams
Know always how much I care and will ever think of you
But I'm not the one you should reach for in the dark
I'm just some tragic clown who wanted too much
I never wished for any heartbreak or disappointments in my life
But they seem to have found me and that's all I have to offer
So before I share this waste with you and shred your joy
Turn and go and don't look back...for even clowns cry
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reprobate
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2008-01-23 05:25:04]
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Re: GREASEPAINT, WISHES AND TEARDROPS
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by Tweeky on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 05:49:10 AM AEST
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Good work , I like this .Most people can relate to this poem .
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Re: GREASEPAINT, WISHES AND TEARDROPS
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 06:53:23 AM AEST
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| Paragraph to sentence structure-No More Tears-Im So Lonely Im So Lonely I Could Cry-Heartbreaker Dreammaker Do Come Around Me-as in-NAIL-N.I.N.-video begining the heartbeat-My Name Is Lucifer Please Take My Hand-I Think Im Dumb Maby Just Happy,Hate Me Hate Me Again-Knights In White Satin Never Reaching The End Letters Unfolded Never Meaning To Send-aluminum foil,Lightning Crashes-Ride The Lightning-Are You Afraid?Dream On-Im The Killer Im The Clown-,Up Up Up And Down Turn Turn Turn Around,the clown eatin chicken in the begining of the zombie movie would be picturectic(sp?)-Great Poem:GREASEPAINT, WISHES AND TEARDROPS:Comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. |
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Re: GREASEPAINT, WISHES AND TEARDROPS
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 03:47:36 PM AEST
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ok i will hold my hands up now and openly admit im terrified of clowns...
that aside again you hit that place in my heart that most poetry struggles to reach....ok still a lil with the clowns...
this is how i always felt with the guy i left in england. i told him from the start to never expect too much from me... then i fell in love with him..damn that was the first "mistake" then i left him to persue my dream... and finally someone find how to voice their emotions...
but seriously your poetry touches me in ways i forgot good writing could... |
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Re: GREASEPAINT, WISHES AND TEARDROPS
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th January 2008 @ 03:53:07 PM AEST
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WOW.
I do not even know what to say. The power, emotion and honesty just set me back on my seat.
damn man..... this rocks......
Michelle |
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Re: GREASEPAINT, WISHES AND TEARDROPS
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th May 2014 @ 04:17:51 PM AEST
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oh my! this is so heartbreaking! it is an exquisite beautifully
penned write! i believe you are selling yourself short though,
you have unlimited creative talents and are truly gifted poetically...
you are gallant though in the way a gentleman is:had to laugh
though about the foil, lol, a lovely poem here, keep writing!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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