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Sun As You Set
Contributed by
trueecho
on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 06:14:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Sun as you set
I am not asleep
You bother by casting shadows
Soon you will be asleep too
I don't need you to defend me anymore
I don't need you to hold my hand
Because in letting go
You showed me the truth
Dreams in eyes passing by
Rosy colored vision is natural
In the passenger seat
But your dreams aren't something
You can take with you
When you step out of the car
Vassar's not comin around
You're broken
Copyright ©
trueecho
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2008-01-23 06:14:17]
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Re: Sun As You Set
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 06:34:22 AM AEST
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| Shadow Stranger-Dream On-Break On Through To The Other Side-Unshuher of The Final Countdown-Great poem:Sun As You Set:Comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. poested updated journal. |
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Re: Sun As You Set
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by SilverRain on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 06:45:10 AM AEST
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| beautiful flow to this piece...almost dreamy. stunning! really enjoyed this. |
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