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Silver Shards of Sorrow
Contributed by
true
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Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 12:09:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Take a few more pills till I cant feel the pain
Swallow them like pride in order to stay sane
Images and painful words flapping fretful through my brain
Sorrow and regret pounding down on me like rain
Sobbing cries echo emptily across the vast abyss
An unending chasm that was once filled with bliss
Soul torn to tatters by that unfulfilled kiss
How did I end up as broken as this?
I know not what drew my to you
Maybe your pain that I also knew
Lost we all others that we could cling to
Souls akin in loneliness and rue
I pushed you away, the one I held dear
Lashing out in pain and in fear
Unable to look at you or a mirror
Lost in my darkness the world all unclear
Couldnt you see the truth in my eyes?
The unspoken words behind all the lies
The softly spoken whispers hidden in my cries
I guess you couldnt which is why my soul dies
I couldnt make you love me, but I suppose its my mistake
It wasnt enough to love for loves sake
My heart on a silver platter, there for you to take
But I guess I should have realized it was also yours to break
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2008-01-23 12:09:13]
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Re: Silver Shards of Sorrow
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 01:20:06 PM AEST
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| an amazingly sad, yet well written poem. nicely done. |
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Re: Silver Shards of Sorrow
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by Poetic_Punk on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 10:28:49 PM AEST
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| Great Poem, inspired by someone? |
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Re: Silver Shards of Sorrow
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by doug on
Thursday, 24th January 2008 @ 02:12:21 PM AEST
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Your writing has a way of hitting me.
This one is a little to close to home
for me. lol. A great job though.
I hope to see more from you soon.
I know you are busy but I love reading
your new poems. This poem got an emotional reaction from me most certainly
and that is what good poetry is supposed to do. Take care , truly , doug
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Re: Silver Shards of Sorrow
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by shelby on
Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 01:58:24 PM AEST
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Your heart is on the page twined with each word.
This is poetry at its finest. You took something so painful and expressed it with such beauty and class.
Beautiful write though I am sorry for the pain you are feeling.
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Re: Silver Shards of Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 04:13:35 PM AEST
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This one is really sad. I've been there, both the emotion and writing ones similar to this. I can definiterly relate. I need to add you to my list of "must read".
You've brought the emotion to life on this page.
Take care,
Tim |
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