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slow walk
Contributed by
spooky
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Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 06:11:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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slow walks through the woods,
cherishing the sound that it makes,
birds cherping, leaves blowing in the breeze,
a beautiful sight it brings to me,
a clearing just ahead,
blue night skies, as the moon shines it's light,
grey clouds start to cover her up,
as if she was ready to sleep,
but she doesn't she shines even brighter,
the stars dance in the night,
as the fireflies gives their light,
just a beautiful sight to me,
this night time breeze is gentle to the touch,
gentle enough to want to have forever,
but cant,,
as the morning starts to show it's glow from the east,
it tells us that it's time for another day,
enjoy the day at hand, for their might not be another,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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2008-01-23 18:11:05]
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Re: slow walk
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by Poetic_Punk on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 08:07:41 PM AEST
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| Great poem, you can loose yourself in it, very real |
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Re: slow walk
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th January 2008 @ 03:43:23 PM AEST
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Craig,
I am unable to pick a favorite it all ties in so pretty.
Nature touches us, and you brought nature right into the room I am sitting in with this beautiful write.
The end is so very true....... I am learning more everyday.
Michelle |
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