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Sexual pleasure made super-marvellous to justify my death
Contributed by
harmony
on
Friday, 25th January 2008 @ 07:09:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Good morning darling
I hope the earth dies soon
to make this morning solid
I have reached my heaven
to its most believable
My heaven the most conceivable
I have reached the highest point
and the point has been wasted
You are the most disgusting taste
i have ever tasted
Sick with excitement dear
Copyright ©
harmony
... [
2008-01-25 07:09:27]
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Re: Sexual pleasure made super-marvellous to justify my death
(User Rating: 1 )
by UnknownLegend on
Saturday, 26th January 2008 @ 01:33:07 AM AEST
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| The only thing I can get from this is you just masturbated and then it got really weird. |
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Re: Sexual pleasure made super-marvellous to justify my death
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by Poetic_Punk on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 02:07:52 AM AEST
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| interesting comment unknown legend and im afraid i have to agree, not alot in this one |
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Re: Sexual pleasure made super-marvellous to justify my death
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by joydeep_nath on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 06:56:44 PM AEST
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| hey cool....this makes a lil sense n then it all fizzles out..but still a way 2 keep yr brains busy...just keep writing.. |
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