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Uncouth Ending
Contributed by
Poetic_Punk
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Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 02:14:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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At death do we part
How do we leave untouched by truth
Yet we exist with purpose,
we have a place to start
And still we leave concealed,
In a way uncouth.
We exist here in surplus
Here i stand in the light
Here i stand plain in sight
This is where i say goodnight
And to you all i say goodbye
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2008-01-28 02:14:34]
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Re: Uncouth Ending
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by brew on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 07:05:57 AM AEST
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Certainly abstract, yet, it was an interesting write, and to think about. Abstract is my favourite, to do...Will read more.
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Re: Uncouth Ending
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 12:17:33 PM AEST
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Very interesting write, enjoyable to read and ponder on.
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Re: Uncouth Ending
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 05:53:10 AM AEST
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cant say im a fan of abstract writing, certainly drawing i am though...
it is very true we can never share our moment of death and many have a morbid interest in what it would feel like. i mean i would like to know what it feels like but i wouldnt want to actually be dead at the end of it... ah im weird lol
i liked this though, made me stop and think about something else other than what my recent write has been about...thanks
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Re: Uncouth Ending
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by Tweeky on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 09:45:53 AM AEST
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In my line of work ..I often deal with death ..and its the most difficult thing to deal with .. I feel that when a person dies ..there soul leaves the body ...the body is left but just an empty shell . .
Good poem , well done .
claire
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