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A Timeless Scar
Contributed by
Poetic_Punk
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Wednesday, 30th January 2008 @ 01:46:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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A timeless scar passes into the realm of never ending sorrow
Its own form becomes a diluted tear from the eye of an imortal thought
While the laws of physics shatter into a million proven theories and flawed judgements with eternity rendering every moment a snapshot of timeless value
How can you see a star die if time is still
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Re: A Timeless Scar
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 30th January 2008 @ 06:09:50 PM AEST
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I liked this and I love abstract........ sometimes they are the best.
To me I see a hurt that you thought had passed or that was buried until something brought it to life even for a brief moment to hurt you once more.
I love How can you see a star die if time is still...
profound........
I do not know how to make a statement to that one..
though in my own thinking I compare it to star gazing and before your eyes the star falls then is gone....... kind of like our heart when it is broken... we are so full of life and shine then when we are hurt a bit of that shine is dulled .....
Do not mind me I am drinking wine and eating chocolate cake................ lol
I do love this write.
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Re: A Timeless Scar
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by SilverRain on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 08:29:13 PM AEST
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| Thought provoking piece. Awesome ending! If this was written with the help of fire water...pls give me some! LOL Well done. |
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