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Puddles
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 30th January 2008 @ 06:53:20 PM in AEST
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Rainy nights suit her
thunder and lightning
everything enticing
electric and fierce
supreme hands
conducting the choir
of divine nature
knowing the moon
is full tonight
though her shine
is dimmed, strained.
Puddles forming
depths of water rising
storms suit her well.
Feeling of "wet"
the rush of the chill
winters night cold
making it real
waking the senses
stirring the being
sensual in nature
sacrificing myself
once more
soaked and dripping
running, flowing
the puddles and I.
shelby
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2008-01-30 18:53:20]
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Re: Puddles
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by Poetic_Punk on
Wednesday, 30th January 2008 @ 09:23:56 PM AEST
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Great poem michelle,
i love the winter, its so much better than sumer, cold and rainy is my kind of weather, i like walking in a down poor in shorts and a shirt.
good writing :) |
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Re: Puddles
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 12:16:11 AM AEST
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to dance in the rain....a most cleansing experience
Hugs
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Re: Puddles
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by conorshawn on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 05:02:41 AM AEST
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| wow very well put you captured my attention and left me wondering if i had been there. |
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Re: Puddles
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by UnknownLegend on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 09:25:12 AM AEST
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| Spoke volumes but subtle enough to tease to the end... write on Michelle |
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Re: Puddles
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 03:21:54 PM AEST
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This is beautiful shel, i can hear the taping of
rain drops dancing on my window sil amidst the dampness of the night, your poetry is most inspiring my friend . . .
((((Michelle))))
take care and t y also, 4 your read and
comment.
Ben |
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Re: Puddles
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by emystar on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 07:19:14 PM AEST
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Girlfriend,
I knew we had some things in common but found another one, playin in the storm.
very creative. yo, go girl.
huggs, smiles, puddles,
emy |
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Re: Puddles
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by Spike on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 10:29:08 PM AEST
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Hi Michelle,
it just started raining a cold downpoar in Sydney tonight, much like you've described here. My kinda weather too.
S. |
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