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I Made A Wish
Contributed by
honey56
on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 05:35:21 AM in AEST
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I made a wish upon a
Falling star
Hoping
Eagerly
To make that one
Little wish
In hoping
My wish would prevail
Itself
To be true
And start the rain
Or maybe snow
And let me make it
To a Beauty salon
While I attempt to sing
Aint no sunshine when
Hes gone
As
The dogs howl at the
Moon.
Or maybe
My singing
Lord
My wish was not granted
For I still cant sing
The dogs and cats seem
To appear disturb when I
Sing
They howl and meow
I wished upon a falling
Star
For a singing voice that
Would make me rich
maybe a bit famous
Laugh
So, that dream just
Blew away
Within the frosty winds
In the year of the rain
Washed away with the
High tide
I wished upon a falling
Star
Didnt get my wish but
That beautiful little twinkling
Star
Was truly intriguing for the
Eye to see
Thank God
I went to a beauty salon
Got the works
Clean down to my toes
Aint that grand and I
And I feel brand new
Copyright ©
honey56
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2008-01-31 05:35:21]
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Re: I Made A Wish
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by shelby on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 06:37:21 AM AEST
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And I feel brand new that statement tops it all....
I really enjoyed this and the format of it carried me along with the write........ Lovely poem as always.
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Re: I Made A Wish
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by JohnYamrus on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 07:21:44 AM AEST
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nicely done!
i think you have a typo in it...in the following line...
"To appear disturb when I"
i think you meant "disturbed"
beyond that this is really nicely done.
john
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Re: I Made A Wish
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by conorshawn on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 07:33:07 AM AEST
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| ha you done it again brillant |
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Re: I Made A Wish
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by Tweeky on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 11:14:09 AM AEST
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Thank god for beauty salons ! lol
A nicely uplifting poem . The flow is beautiful Honey56.
;o)
claire
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