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over the edge and back again
Contributed by
Samjoelle
on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 05:16:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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thousands of burning specs on this earth
with it's beauty so deep
it makes the cold hearted weep
rolling fields of green, splashed with purple tints of a delicate flower
the rivers roar a mighty song
As the water flows between the jagged rocks
A gasp of air reveals a new born life
an undescribable scent rolls on through the atmosphere
Running through the fields of clover
You know what our world is made of
Its the peice of art all painters strive for
Its our home
were all we've ever come to know or seem to know exists
and now it's gone to waste
Human ignorence will tear it up
for stone, and brick, and hate
so with our world in such a state
don't cry yourself to sleep
just lye in the meadow
feel the breeze wisp by
and know we are the last one's left.
Copyright ©
Samjoelle
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2008-01-31 17:16:41]
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Re: over the edge and back again
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by emystar on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 06:24:57 PM AEST
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Welcome to our global family, ypdc.
keep puttin it on ppaper 'cause it's really good writing.
to me emptying my head was the reaon I picked up the pen.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: over the edge and back again
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by Poetic_Punk on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 11:01:24 PM AEST
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| love this poem, powerful imagary, and it makes you think, it makes me Proud of my countries beautiful green image. great write |
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Re: over the edge and back again
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by SilverRain on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 05:58:37 AM AEST
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| stunning visuals...stunning write. |
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Re: over the edge and back again
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 07:07:19 AM AEST
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| great post |
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