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Silent cry
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 04:15:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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And I cried hold me, hold m, hold me and the mountain just smiled and the waves kept on teasing and laughing saying weve heard that before
nothing new.
try again.
but I dont know what else to say
have nowhere else to go.
my world is perfect..
everything in a box.
all sorted except for me.....
and I tried again..
hold me, hold me, tell me I am worth something
and the waves kept on rolling and laughing and rolling and I thought u would listen, but u did not really care enough..
where to from here.
where do I always go
Just on..
just do, do not want or ask or live.
just be.
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SilverRain
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2008-02-01 04:15:33]
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Re: Silent cry
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 11:04:03 AM AEST
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and the waves kept on rolling that entire line just drew me into it.
Just be........ yes sometimes we need to just be....
Lovely write.....
nature does heal
Michelle |
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Re: Silent cry
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by scroggins on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 02:23:38 AM AEST
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| I recieved a notice that you had sent a message to me, but i was unable to retrieve it. The last sentence of your poem is the salve of the spirit. scroggins |
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Re: Silent cry
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by alibof10 on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 05:32:19 AM AEST
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| wow .. awesome man .. love the ending!! |
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