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My mysterious girl
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 05:07:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Perfect Vision
Dressed in white
Gloating, floating
Invasive, elusive
My mysterious girl
Complete mind *****
No comfort zones
No places to hide
Exposed
Revealed for all to see
Hide me
Hide me
My heart cries out
But u keep on floating,
Wiping away the wounds
And gently kissing them better
Let them fade away as if they were never there
Dissolve completely
And u remain
A presence
A lifeform
A lover
A friend
My mysterious girl.
Copyright ©
SilverRain
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2008-02-01 05:07:57]
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Re: My mysterious girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by UnknownLegend on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 08:42:57 AM AEST
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| This was a good poem ..... very refreshing concept and choice of words..write on!!! |
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Re: My mysterious girl
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by alibof10 on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 05:34:53 AM AEST
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| man this was well organized and very style-ish ... gr8 work |
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