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Let go
Contributed by
the_young_poet
on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 02:21:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Little shattered soul
Desire has taken its toll
Upon you
No matter what you do
Pain will never seem to ease
The words continue to tease
Restricted by chains
Battered with constant pains
Locked behind the cellar door
Your heart bruised and sore
Refusing to let your soul free
Unwilling to see
Theres no one outside the door
To pick up the pieces off the floor
Little one wake up from your dream
No matter how tempting it may seem
To stay in your dream-like state
Its gotten very late
The one you love is no longer here
Which is what you fear
Which you refuse to realize
I can hear your distant cries
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2008-02-01 14:21:56]
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Re: Let go
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by spooky on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 05:27:31 PM AEST
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even when your grown up the pain is still there, well written,,
a friend in words spooky,, |
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Re: Let go
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 02:57:57 AM AEST
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Oh this is so great, I stayed in that state for almost 15 years after I lost my husband and the same with me brother..But the lord finally woke me and i'm dealing with everything now..
Excellent write this is..
God Bless & Much Love My Friend In Poetry |
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