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The One
Contributed by
Writing_The_Sun
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Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 04:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My problems float away as i look into your eyes,
The only thing that comes to me is your an angel in disguise
And when you smile it brings me to heavens pearly gates
You must be the greatest gift that god had ever made
To see you shed a tear sheds away my life
You don't know how i feel which brings to me a sigh
But one of these days i will have the nerve
To tell to you the speech of what the has mirror heard
Ya i practice everyday cause i want to give you love
So that when its time TOGETHER we fly off as a dove
L.A. McFarland 16 Years old
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Re: The One
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 04:36:24 PM AEST
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I must say for 16 you are well on your way, a lovely write. Nicely done.
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Re: The One
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by spooky on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 05:34:58 PM AEST
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beautifully written,, with affection,,
a friend in words spooky |
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