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I WATCH THE RAIN
Contributed by
beefybeebuzz
on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 05:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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in the neighborhood of rain
i watch the soft falling drops
in the distance sounds a train
when it rains harder, it stops
i watch the misty current
travel down the slanted hill
the rain begins to hit me
and increases, but still
i watch the distant puddle
with its many rippled waves
and the wind that moves the tree
which controls how it behaves
i watch the dim lit lamplight
it only flickered twice
although its cold and dark out here
its peaceful...and nice
every few minutes, when i see a car
i can hear its engine running
even when its traveled far
even though im far away
i feel as if im home
the rain is just as peaceful as the oceans waves of foam
i watch and stare quietly
on the balcony up top
and treasure the rain that tumbles down
each and every drop
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Re: I WATCH THE RAIN
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by SilverRain on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 09:31:11 PM AEST
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| Peacefull, calming read. |
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Re: I WATCH THE RAIN
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 02:40:46 AM AEST
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I love the rain, it relaxes me..I like the way it sounds hitting against my window..But "Me I love snow also"..lol
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Re: I WATCH THE RAIN
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by shelby on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 11:03:25 PM AEST
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I loved this write and the way you described the rain is enchanting.
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