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Witness
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 04:48:29 AM in AEST
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Witness the stone that forms the wall
The wall, that around her heart does stand
Witness the writings on each brick
The writings, each written by only his hand
Witness the child who loved so deep
The Father who could not love at all
Witness the wall around her heart
The Father managed to build so tall
Witness a life of emptiness
Never learning how to give
Witness a life of pointlessness
Never knowing how to live
Witness the loneliness of this woman
As she walks lifes journey alone
Witness her face light up with joy
When in Gods loving arms, she is finally home
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2008-02-02 04:48:29]
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Re: Witness
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by scroggins on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 04:53:18 AM AEST
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| Very sweet. You are my first read on this site that has pushed the button. You are no longer alone. excellant. scroggins |
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Re: Witness
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by flight_238 on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 05:19:10 AM AEST
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| :) I like it! |
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Re: Witness
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 10:11:46 AM AEST
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Excellent write..Really brilliant!!
God Bless!! |
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Re: Witness
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by shelby on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 11:38:05 AM AEST
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beautiful my friend......
Michelle |
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