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Hooked
Contributed by
spike
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Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 08:34:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Dont we love to be the lover
and the rejected soul as well?
in the loneliness of the heart,
sometimes misery makes it swell
We do so love to do the touching
and be in turn so graced,
yet the memory of the contact
is too easily erased
The heart knows the ecstasy of
love, and griefs epiphany,
and the pleasures of the moment
only rivalled by the wait;
the maestro and the instrument
in harmony is life content,
but discord has its sweetness, bitter
as it tumbles over strings
We do so hate to be unnoticed
and fear it to our shame;
the heavy heart at least is full
and keeps us in the game
Oh, I love to be the lover,
but the rejected soul will do.
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spike
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2008-02-04 20:34:17]
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Re: Hooked
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 10:12:51 PM AEST
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Great writting but I quit.
Maybe someday.
Awesome work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Hooked
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 7th February 2008 @ 02:06:06 PM AEST
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this is a very well written poem.. almost like a lil story.. i enjoyed this alot
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Hooked
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 12:36:02 PM AEST
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S, oh my, what a terribly sad last line.
There is such a sweet flow to this and yeah, I guess I MUST agree
with you on the content. What we humans will put ourselves
through, but oh how GLORIOUS it is to feel, no? What would we
do, really, if we had not emotions to make us feel alive?
Gimmie it all !!! I'll withstand the cold just for a small fraction of
the warmth. Your last two lines remind me of that everso profound
wisdom .. 'better to have love and lost ...blah blah blah' ..lol
You got it going on, spike!! :)
~Breezy |
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Re: Hooked
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by brew on
Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 12:56:44 PM AEST
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So..hooked, or wanted?
i dont :know
Beautiful words, yet took from the heart.......so....are u hooked........or wanna be be hooked>!!!!!!!
brew~ |
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