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Tears Behind the Veil
Contributed by
funnyface09
on
Tuesday, 5th February 2008 @ 06:04:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My eyes are blurry
Everything I see is not clear
Everything I see seems unreal
My vision of you is blocked
Blocked by the veil in front of my eyes
You did not look my way
And I try not looking into your eyes
As I try not to let my eyes shows my pain
I walked away
And closed my eyes
Felt something warm on my cheeks
That moment I realized
The veil in front of my eyes
Are the tears that I held back so hard
All these while, all these while
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2008-02-05 18:04:39]
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Re: Tears Behind the Veil
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 6th February 2008 @ 03:11:11 AM AEST
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Often for me, the title of a piece is the thing that draws me to reading it.
You did not disappoint here with the content within.
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Re: Tears Behind the Veil
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 7th February 2008 @ 02:03:31 PM AEST
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this is a short yet powerful emotional little poem here. .very well expressed
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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