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never thought i'd say thank you
Contributed by
SamJoelle
on
Wednesday, 6th February 2008 @ 03:18:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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snow, it shines as if i walk on a sea of crystals, sparkles
i can't help but be in awe of my surroundings
You tell me there isn't a god?
Take a look around you, this all can't be a mistake
My feet, they print the snow as i walk on bye
the town is asleep, but the light's they are dancing all around me
It's all alive, it's all so stunning
being alone, it's not something to be scared of
it's something to embrace
if you learn to love yourself, then you can learn to love and admire truly
I'm glad i have achieved this
What is it?
Well maybe the only greatest gift ever given to you
The gift of you're soul, the gift of the earth
first you must conquer yourself before you can understand what this is..
the last few years, my life has had a blanket of hatred covering me and my thoughts
loosing all you're friends, having something taken away from you, you can never get back...
in spite of it all, there was a glimpse of hope a flicker.. a spark
i grabbed it
it taught me all i know
i've finally let go, as the leaf fall's from the tree
The hate, has dropped from my mind
my dearest friends, you let me down, when i needed you most
but unknowingly you helped me figure out, how to be strong
I don't hate anymore.. it was hard to forgive
i will still wave a hello or whisper a smile if i ever see them
Because if it wasn't for the hell i walked through
i wouldn't have found myself at the end of the dark tunnel
So, thank's i guess
Copyright ©
SamJoelle
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2008-02-06 15:18:15]
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Re: never thought i'd say thank you
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by scroggins on
Thursday, 7th February 2008 @ 01:40:45 AM AEST
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| This should help others survive the trek. congratulations. |
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Re: never thought i'd say thank you
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by Phoenix2008 on
Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 12:21:36 AM AEST
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| I think this 1 is on the button! :-) Very accurate, great piece! |
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Re: never thought i'd say thank you
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by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:44:36 AM AEST
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| I feel your a stronger person now. Great write i have to say i felt your messege from personal experience. |
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