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Dimly Lit
Contributed by
Kayden
on
Monday, 11th February 2008 @ 09:50:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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On my knees with my mind surrendered Thoughts around my feelings anchored to the ground sheltered
Keep me Alive keep me breathing Keep me dazed keep me screaming
Let it up let it up keep this whole world floating Push it down let it drown don't let it bear up on me Hold it up on a string like a playful trinket Place it down softly down cause it's all the I have left
Tears fun down even through the driest of creeks Thoughts of scorn thoughts of lust such a confusing beast Running through what i thought would be my desire Such a cold a hazy place why would this be my fire
Keep me happy keep me breathing Keep me vacant keep me screaming
On my knees with my mind in forfeit Open heart, lonely cavern, all but happiness entombed it
Copyright ©
Kayden
... [
2008-02-11 09:50:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dimly Lit
(User Rating: 1 ) by EcuaOrgullo310 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 12:23:31 PM AEST (User
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Very passionate and emotional.
Has a tragic tinge.
very well written. |
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