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Fluid Trinity
Contributed by
shinji_kusa
on
Monday, 11th February 2008 @ 09:03:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Three rivers came around,
To spread some life into a town,
For once people were dying,
People soar,
People crying,
But the clearest waters flowed,
From the deepest inland seas,
And nothing came about,
Except the flowers and the trees.
What did people say,
Whenst saw this turn around?
Lord Bless our neighbors,
Meaning has been found.
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2008-02-11 21:03:42]
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Re: Fluid Trinity
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 02:24:57 PM AEST
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Ahhhhhhhhhthis is lovely. "Still Waters Run Deep!" Jason, you say you're a student teacher, you're going to be great with your students.........they're going to love you.
I taught for forty years.......keep them guessing, and they'll love your poetry just like me!
Warm love,
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