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the morning sky
Contributed by
forgotten_poet
on
Tuesday, 12th February 2008 @ 07:43:17 AM in AEST
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i awoke with the sun in morn
as if the sun and i were just reborn
renewed from what we were, so torn
set free from memories we scorn
falling into shades of blue
i never felt so small before
the sky reminded me of you
these shades of blue with colors worn
reaching towards the morning sky
my fingertips just barely graze
the most beautiful thing to greet my eyes
sweet trails of the morning rays
but o how it seemed so very close
the thing which i longed for the most
was as near as the rays the sun has shone
where there i reached for you alone
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Re: the morning sky
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by SilverRain on
Wednesday, 13th February 2008 @ 02:58:10 AM AEST
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Lovely play with colours, can share in your longing and feel how close, yet far your longing is.
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